Well this is it, the last round of the mansion. Now of course I would normally just give it to ya here and now, but I feel I should allow Charles to speak his thoughts on the match, Charles?
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Ahem, right then! Hello everyone! Charles here to give my thoughts on this round.
Caretaker-of-myth VS Teloka
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I suppose I will start with Miss Caretaker.
Caretaker, as always, I was ensnared by your amazing writing and use of words! None of the books I have read in the library could compare to how well written they were!
I could easily imagine what was happening while reading the whole entry: From young Miss Peggy having some delicious biscuits, to the Book flooding the entire mansion with lava. It was all very vivid and imaginative.
As well, you are the first of Miss Teloka's opponents to actually directly attack the Book itself, which is surprising, considering that all of Peggy's past opponents seemed to ignore attacking the source of the power, but rather attack the innocence wielding it.
The characterization is perfect, which is pretty much a standard for your work! In fact, the characterization is so strong, she even developed myself(Charles) as well! Impressive!
But what really got me was something that I almost overlooked in review: The comic portion of the entry. This portion was what brought your entry to a whole new level, and as well, won me over as an entry in whole. You used all three characters perfectly, and it overall, made the entry all the more enjoyable.
Overall, Miss Caretaker, you did amazingly well. So much so, that it has raised the bar on both your story telling and skill as a writer and artist over all.
Bravo, Miss Caretaker!
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And then Teloka...
Miss Teloka, I dare say, you probably did the boldest move I have ever seen: Completely changing the setting. So much so, that the story is less about the fight, but four characters growing and developing. You handled Miss Dreamweaver, Miss Peggy, and Myself(Charles) very, very well, and it made me want to see how it all ended even more.
Trapping them in a fairy tale, making them close friends, and involving myself(Charles) in the story more than ever, you have truly made a masterpiece of story telling. From start, to finish. And even when it eventually became but a script, I was still in love with the story. I just could not take my eyes off of it, and that is something not many stories have the quality of.
But, even when I was enchanted by the fairy tale part of the story, being pulled back into the grim tale of reality was quite a slap in the face. Showing that Miss Dreamweaver both was determined to not lose any one else, and solidify her friendship with Miss Peggy, she sacrifices her position in the tournament to keep Miss Peggy alive.
I wish it all could have ended there, with the two living happily ever after, but as the ending showed, this was no fairy tale...
Overall, I was amazed by the entry, bravo, Miss Teloka, bravo!
And so comes the time, I wish would never come: The time, I must choose only one of you to become the victor of the Mansion...
Thus... The winner of Fury's Mansion is...
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Congratulations, Miss Caretaker, you advanced to the final area.
Miss Teloka, you put up a grand fight. And certianly gave Miss Caretaker strong competition. I congratulate you for making this far.
Accept this humble butler's apologies for your loss, and I hope to see more from both of you soon...
Just remember, don't cry because it ended...
Smile because it happened.
Sincerely
~Charles
Fury's Mansion Results Final Round
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Time to watch the fun...
Please? ...
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Time to watch the fun...
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[ Sometimes I feel like I'm animated. I'm overly expressive and physics don't seem to apply quite right! ]
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Time to watch the fun...
Will that be all, sir? *bows at the waist*
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Dare you to unlock the secrets of my mind...
Genius is in the details...and I'm going to live up to that!
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OBJECTION! I defy your logic, and everything it stands for!!!
Panton est substructio vero.
How are the GNARLES?
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I AM A GREAT DRAGON OF JUSTICE AND LOVE
FIGHTING TO PROTECT THOSE WHO ARE NOT DEAD
BATTLING THE FORCES OF DARKNESS ON MY GREAT CRUSADE
MY ONLY GOAL AND WISH
TO EAT SOME FUCKING BREAD
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